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Monday, June 29, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #24- Revising a Narrative Essay- Delete


In lesson #23, I shared DARE as the steps to revising.  This lesson will focus on the first letter- D.  D stands for DELETE unnecessary information.  Many times students add things that aren't needed for their story.  See below for an example.  After sharing the poster (or creating your own paragraph with an added sentence or two that doesn't make sense or fit) with the students, have them go through their own rough drafts and delete things that interrupt the flow to the story or don't belong.




Next writing mini lesson #25- will be DARE to Revise- ADD

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  1. my aunt who is a writer in a famous custom dissertation writing service always used to tell me that whenever we write something , that may be just a paragraph or an essay or a dissertation read after you complete the paper then you will come to know the issue that we have done while writing the paper. I think it is better to handover our paper to someone else because ourself we can't trace out much mistake but other will do that carefully

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