Thursday, May 8, 2014
Monday, April 7, 2014
Not only are the covers of these journals creative, but my students' writing blew me away! They really jumped into the 1840's and wrote with incredible feelings. I actually found myself smiling, laughing, and even tearing up while reading them. They know how to touch my heart! We started off with the read aloud, Dear Levi: Letters from the Overland Trail by Elvira Woodruff. Then brainstormed hardships, friendships and things they encountered.
I loved this one! They got ahold of the feathers, yarn and beads that we used when making dream catchers in our Native American Unit so I allowed it. Why not? Creativity was busting out the seams! This student took her booklet, folded and tied it. It may not be the neatest or most colorful, but her description of what each thing was for was precious!
He wanted to make sure it looked dirty from the trail. Love it!
These are wrinkled and the one on the right is even torn so it could look more realistic.
I loved this one! They got ahold of the feathers, yarn and beads that we used when making dream catchers in our Native American Unit so I allowed it. Why not? Creativity was busting out the seams! This student took her booklet, folded and tied it. It may not be the neatest or most colorful, but her description of what each thing was for was precious!
I was so happy to even see my nonwriters excited about writing. Sorry about having to lean sideways. I haven't perfected iphone pictures and uploads yet! Here are the directions for their booklets and ideas to use (after our brainstorm).
If you need these to print these off, they are only $2 in my store with a rubric!
Monday, March 3, 2014
We are going 1:1 in ipads next year and I was able to get my hands on the ipad cart last week. With our writing test around the corner, I decided to have the kids make imovies of what they learned in writing class this year. It was hard to pick which ones to post!
The first one is the writing process. Darius takes us through the writing process posters:
The first one is the writing process. Darius takes us through the writing process posters:
Next, Rachel shares her interactive writing notebook:
Saturday, February 8, 2014
Here is a cute way to have your students practice parts of speech around Valentine's Day! There are 68 words to sort into nouns, pronouns, verbs, and adjectives. One of the girls on my team requested this so here ya go Brantley! There are 17 of each. I'm going to have students work in groups to sort the words. I will tell my little Valentines that they need 17 in each group to help them make sure they are grouped correctly. Then they will get to color the sweet printable. Maybe they will even get a REAL sweet treat from me!
Wednesday, January 22, 2014
I am sorry I have been sooooo busy! Not only do I work full-time, run my teacher store, and drive my kids around, but I was put in charge of our Sunshine Committee at school and planned our after Christmas Party. Well, I can't do anything half-way so we had a blast! I made little gift bags for everyone that had a lottery ticket, a good fortune cookie, mints, and adorable little similes that my students made and rolled up into scrolls and tied them with ribbon. Everyone loved them!
Ok, onto business. Since we have been moving right along in class but I haven't posted, I am going to post everything we did with the revision and editing stages! Get ready! We take a ton of time on these two steps! Get out some colorful pens! I love to see color when editing and making revisions!
REVISIONS:
I use the acronym DARE. I don't know where it came from, but I've used it for over 15 years.
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Ok, onto business. Since we have been moving right along in class but I haven't posted, I am going to post everything we did with the revision and editing stages! Get ready! We take a ton of time on these two steps! Get out some colorful pens! I love to see color when editing and making revisions!
REVISIONS:
I use the acronym DARE. I don't know where it came from, but I've used it for over 15 years.
Mentor Text: Hooray for Diffendoofer Day by Jack Pretlutsky and Dr. Seuss. Look at the appendix to show students how famous authors find the need to revise! This is also the place I tell them about RoaldDahl and show his interactive hut online. There is a trash can with scribbled notes to click! Tell the students that even the best authors revise, edit, revise, edit over and over before they even think about the publishing stage. www.roalddahl.com and http://www.roalddahlmuseum.org/discoverdahl/exploring/
We spend many days on lessons that we add to our writing notebooks and then revise our papers with each lesson.
Lesson 1- Deleting information that doesn't belong in our stories.
Lesson 2- We work on adding more detail in our stories.
Lesson 3- Adding transition words especially between paragraphs.
Lesson 4- Exchanging- Exchange beginning for a rockin beginning! Use the mentor text, Love Ruby Lavender by Deborah Wiles
Lesson 5- Exchanging- Exchange trash can words and every day words for Million Dollar Words! Use the mentor text, I Love You the Purplest by Barbara Joosse.
I created an acronym for this lesson.
CLIPS ( for money clips)
C- Colorful Adjectives
L- Lively Figurative Language
I- Ideal Adverbs
P- Powerful Verbs
S- Sizzling Sense Words
It is my favorite lesson of the whole unit and I created a bulletin board to go along with it. Above the board, I give some word lists to use instead of good/nice/great, said, run. I also have a word list for trash can words. Words like said and and great are trash can words and won't be accepted in writing anymore. The kids LLLOOOVVVEEEE when they find a trash can word in someone else's writing! Below each of the CLIPS, I post student examples found in their writing. Off to the right side, I have the Writing Process where students move their clips according to where they are in their writing. See the bottom of post for a free link for the Writing Process Posters!
After taking notes, we dive into our own stories and find places to exchange words for million dollar words! I tell my students to use a thesaurus to find better words. They also have million dollar dictionaries where they can look for ideas and add words for future use. This is a wonderful resource for them.
Lesson 6: Variety of Sentences
Lesson 7- Jammin Conclusions: Mentor Texts: First Day Jitters by Danneberg
Owl Moon by Yolen or The First Dog by Brett, Jan.EDITING::
I use the acronym CUPS
C-Capitalization
U-Usage
P-Punctuation
S-Spelling
We spend a day on each of the CUPS by teaching the rules for each, taking notes in notebooks, looking for errors in my story, and then editing their own stories. If you have United Streaming, there are Pendemonium Cartoon lessons (21 mins each) for capitalization, punctuation, and spelling. Kids love them!
Capital Rules
1. The beginning of the sentence (He rode the bike.)
2. The pronoun I (Did I see you at the park?)
3. Proper nouns (Jan, New York City, Golden Gate Bridge)
4. Titles (Tales of the Fourth Grade Nothing)
5. The first word of a quote (She asked, “Why is the sky blue?”
6. Greeting and closing of a friendly letter (Dear Jan, / Sincerely,)
Usage Rules
1.Subject-Verb Agreement- Singular subjects need singular verbs, and plural subjects need plural verbs
A.Singular verbs- is, was, has, had (Ex. The bee is buzzing.)
B.Plural verbs- are, were, have, had (Ex. The bees are buzzing.)
2.Double Negatives- Do not use two or more words that mean “no” in the same sentence. (Ex. no, not, never, nothing, no where, no one, nobody)
3.Complete Sentences- Sentences need a subject and predicate.
A.Subject- Tells whom or what- (My mom)
B.Predicate- what the subject does- (helps me)
C.Fragment- Missing a subject or predicate (The pictures in the book.)
D.Complete- The picturesin the book are colorful.
4.Run-on Sentences- two complete sentences that run together. (Tristan plays soccer they won the game.) To Correct:
A.Two sentences: Tristan plays soccer. They won the game.
B.Compound sentence: Tristan play soccer, and they won the game.
5.Verb Forms and Tenses
Present Tense | 1.Singular or he, she, it- Add –s. 2.Plural or I, we, you, they- Do not add –s. | 1.A dog barks at a stranger. 2. The dogs bark at a stranger. |
Past Tense | Add –ed. (Remember spelling rules!) | A dog barked at stranger. |
Future Tense | Add –will in front of the verb. | A dog will bark at a stranger. |
Punctuation: Mentor Text: Punctuation Takes a Vacation by Robin Pulverand Eats Shoots and Leaves: Why Commas Really Do Make a Difference by Lynne Truss
Punctuation Rules
1.Period
A.End of statement (The monkey was swinging from the tree.)
B.Abbreviations (Mr. Mrs. Dr. Rd. Ave. St. in. ft. yd.)
C. Initials (U.S.A.)
2.Question Mark- Asks a question. (Where is the cute puppy?)
3.Exclamation Point- Shows a strong feeling. (Look at the huge whale!)
4.Commas
A.In a Series (I want a piece of cake,pie, and candy!)
B.Combining sentences (I went to the zoo, but didn’t see the lions.)
C.Introduction (Yes, she is here. Well,I never thought about it.)
D.Between city and state (Pittsburgh,PA)
E.Between date and year (July 4, 2013)
F.After a greeting and closing in a letter (Dear Mom, / Sincerely,)
5. Quotation Marks- Around what the person actually says
(Drake said,“I am going to the concert.”) Notice that there is a comma after said and ending punctuation before the last quotation marks.
6. Apostrophes
A.To replace letters left out of contractions (can not/ can’t)
B.Show ownership (Lisa’s pencil)
Spelling Rules (Free Spelling Dictionary below)
1.Always put a u after a q. (quack, quiet)
2.Every syllable has a vowel.
3.The “soft” sound of c (s sound) or g (j sound) is usually foll0wed by i, y, or e. (city, gym)
4.Write i before e except after c or when sounded like a. (thief, believe, ceiling, receive, neighbor, weigh)
5.Spelling Rules for Adding Inflectional Endings to Words
A.Most words- Add the ending. (talk- talked, talking)
B.Words ending in a single vowel and consonant- Double the final consonant and add the ending. (stop- stopped, stopping)
C.Words ending in silent e- Drop the ebefore adding the ending. (bake, baked, baking)
D.Words end in a consonant and y- Change the y to and i then add the ending unless the ending is -ing. (hurry- hurried, hurrying)
E.Words that end in ss, ch, sh, zz, or x: Add –es (foxes, wishes)
Whew! I made it! I was getting tired towards the end. Next, we will do peer reflections! Stay tuned!
(I have all of these resources in my store if you need them.)
All Inclusive units (400 pages): Includes everything on this blog post plus plus plus.
Million Dollar: Million Dollar Bulletin Board, Dictionary and Resources
Student Resources: Resources for Writing
So what do you think?
Wednesday, January 8, 2014
Since we were gone for two weeks and it is a new year, I wanted to put up a new bulletin board. I thought I would put up a Martin Luther King Jr. board. That way I can keep it up for the rest of January and it will tie into Black History Month. I was so amazed by some of my students and their work! How do these little minds come up with such big ideas?
We started off by reading a biography on MLK. I actually wrote one to go along with the activity so the students would have enough information. We read it together then we started working on a newspaper template. We filled out the timeline together. I explained the importance of increments in timelines. Then we highlighted all the dates and added them to the timeline. I also showed them how to find dates that aren't listed. For example where it says two years later. Then I explained that they will need to pretend they were reporters from back in the 1960's. They need to choose 1 positive and 1 negative event from the bio. I demonstrate how to create a newspaper title, heading, picture caption, etc. and then I let them write! Here are some of their examples:
We started off by reading a biography on MLK. I actually wrote one to go along with the activity so the students would have enough information. We read it together then we started working on a newspaper template. We filled out the timeline together. I explained the importance of increments in timelines. Then we highlighted all the dates and added them to the timeline. I also showed them how to find dates that aren't listed. For example where it says two years later. Then I explained that they will need to pretend they were reporters from back in the 1960's. They need to choose 1 positive and 1 negative event from the bio. I demonstrate how to create a newspaper title, heading, picture caption, etc. and then I let them write! Here are some of their examples:
Cute huh? Well wait to you see what we did next! My heart was melting! I told the class to think about our world today and what they would like to change. WOW! I had tears in my eyes as they shared. I think I will send the parents a list of their ideas.
Here is a quick peek at other students' ideas. Amazing!
Get rid of all sickness
No poverty
Happiness for everyone
Be worry-free
No wars
No crimes or violence
Low gas prices
Better equipment for natural disasters
Nobody be homeless
No animal cruelty or suffering of animals
Don’t judge on appearance
End world hunger
No pollution
Cure for cancer
Save the environment
Save the trees
No global warming
Bring all soldiers home
Peace all over the world
Education for everyone
No endangered animals
Better life for everyone
Everyone have jobs
Find way to avoid concussions
Don’t judge people
Everyone respected for who they are
We put both of the lessons onto one paper for a bulletin board display.
Here are the cute signs!
What do you think? You are welcome to borrow my idea!
If you need the informational text and newspaper template along with a rubric, you can find it here:
Martin Luther King It is also included in my January Writing Bundle
Wednesday, November 13, 2013
Oh where oh where did I leave off? I am sorry if you have been waiting to see samples of the next mini-lessons! I think all teachers have what I call TADD. Teacher ADD. We are all so busy with this and that and zero time to plan, meet individual needs, email parents, grade papers, etc etc. I feel like the time just slips on by and the next thing here we are in November! Half-way through November! Now that I am done with my ramble, let's get to the writing lessons!
We are ready to move onto Narrative Writing! I love love love our notebooks and referring back to our previous lessons! I hold them accountable for the skills we already learned! I even have my Math/Science partner on board and she is keeping up with it too! After introducing the Narrative Writing elements, and looking at our checklist, we were ready for
Step One- Prewriting. Woo woo! Let the writing begin!!!!! We reviewed this poster:
It is very helpful to talk out loud as you are brainstorming for the class sample! I used "A Shattered Window." I talked about why I chose it for my writing and how I could come up with many ideas to go along with it. Then I showed this slide that shows different scenarios for my idea.
We added a few more ideas to the list. For my GT class, I didn't want them using the same prompt. Since we are currently studying mysteries, it worked out great. I told them to think of ideas for a mystery story. Then brainstorm different scenarios for it. They had light bulbs to put in their interactive notebooks. I told them to write their ideas on the front of the light bulb, then choose one idea and put it under the light bulb. Here are some student samples:
Next we has a lesson on task, purpose, and audience. I taught the lesson with this poster on my smart board and then talked through my sample. Students took notes and then decided on the task, purpose, and audience for their own writing and added it to their notebooks:
Before moving on, I wanted my students to create a writing goal. Since we have already covered complete sentences, fragments, run-ons, capitals, punctuation, and some spelling patterns, I told them to choose something that I frequently have to correct in their writing. If I don't have to correct many errors (just a select few) then they may use things like using a thesaurus or adding figurative language. I had a student say, "I can't wait to write this story!" I love hearing their anticipation. I explained that everyone who listens to the lessons and follows directions in the notebooks, should have no problem getting an A on the final product because we are going to go through this first writing piece step-by-step so they completely understand the best strategy to take them through the writing process. Here are some of my students' goals. I was proud of them for thinking about these goals. I probably would have chosen the same ones for them!
Now this creative student took her goal and although I didn't provide or instruct for students to make their goal interactive, she took it upon herself to make hers more fun. She made my day! I loved her "Secret Door" with the goal inside!
And she had even more doors to open!
Graphic Organizer: I showed them many different organizers that they may choose from at a later date but we would use the same one this time. After placing this in our notebooks, I told my cherubs that we will go back to it after each lesson and add to it.
Today, we focused on crafting a plot. My students loved it so much that they asked me to do it again and then asked if we could videotape it. I love being spontaneous and said, "Why not?" Then they said let's put it on Youtube! Oh geeze. Seriously? I said absolutely no at first. I can act out in front of them but others? Not so much. Then I thought if they loved the lesson so much......why not embarrass myself completely and let other students be motivated in writing? So here it is! Enjoy the ride! NO JUDGEMENT ZONE!! Youtube Video on Crafting Plot This is the poster in the background of the video.
Although I had a printable for their notebooks, I recently was told that I need to start being careful of my copies! Oopssss! So I thought this could be one they can draw and take notes.
We are ready to move onto Narrative Writing! I love love love our notebooks and referring back to our previous lessons! I hold them accountable for the skills we already learned! I even have my Math/Science partner on board and she is keeping up with it too! After introducing the Narrative Writing elements, and looking at our checklist, we were ready for
Step One- Prewriting. Woo woo! Let the writing begin!!!!! We reviewed this poster:
It is very helpful to talk out loud as you are brainstorming for the class sample! I used "A Shattered Window." I talked about why I chose it for my writing and how I could come up with many ideas to go along with it. Then I showed this slide that shows different scenarios for my idea.
We added a few more ideas to the list. For my GT class, I didn't want them using the same prompt. Since we are currently studying mysteries, it worked out great. I told them to think of ideas for a mystery story. Then brainstorm different scenarios for it. They had light bulbs to put in their interactive notebooks. I told them to write their ideas on the front of the light bulb, then choose one idea and put it under the light bulb. Here are some student samples:
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| We glued the base and the very top so they could lift it up to put their top choice. |
Next we has a lesson on task, purpose, and audience. I taught the lesson with this poster on my smart board and then talked through my sample. Students took notes and then decided on the task, purpose, and audience for their own writing and added it to their notebooks:
Now this creative student took her goal and although I didn't provide or instruct for students to make their goal interactive, she took it upon herself to make hers more fun. She made my day! I loved her "Secret Door" with the goal inside!
And she had even more doors to open!
Graphic Organizer: I showed them many different organizers that they may choose from at a later date but we would use the same one this time. After placing this in our notebooks, I told my cherubs that we will go back to it after each lesson and add to it.
Today, we focused on crafting a plot. My students loved it so much that they asked me to do it again and then asked if we could videotape it. I love being spontaneous and said, "Why not?" Then they said let's put it on Youtube! Oh geeze. Seriously? I said absolutely no at first. I can act out in front of them but others? Not so much. Then I thought if they loved the lesson so much......why not embarrass myself completely and let other students be motivated in writing? So here it is! Enjoy the ride! NO JUDGEMENT ZONE!! Youtube Video on Crafting Plot This is the poster in the background of the video.
Although I had a printable for their notebooks, I recently was told that I need to start being careful of my copies! Oopssss! So I thought this could be one they can draw and take notes.
Stay tuned for the next lesson!!!!!!!!
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