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Monday, March 30, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #18- Building Suspense and Climax in a Narrative Essay

Writing Mini Lesson #18- Building Suspense and Climax in a Narrative Essay


narrative writing suspense climax mentor text Cinderella plot


Building Suspense and Climax:  
Mentor Text:  Cinderella

After discussing the body section of the essay, develop the suspense and climax in the story.  An author creates suspense and a climax to a story to keep the readers' interest.  This is one of my favorite lessons in narrative writing!  Use a roller coaster like the anchor chart below.  I like to get a matchbox car and ride it up and down the coaster using Cinderella as an example.  I start off by introducing Cinderella, step sisters, and step mother.  I explain how their characters develop and the mean things they do to Cinderella.  Next, I explain how the author increases the suspense when the fairy godmother gets involved and Cinderella shows up at the ball.  The action rises when Cinderella dances with the prince.  The suspense increases even more when the clock strikes 12 and she loses her shoe!!!!  The climax is when the prince is looking for the right foot to fit in the shoe.  Will Cinderella get to try on the shoe?  Will the prince find her?  


characters, setting, problem, increase suspense, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution


ACTIVITY:
Divide students up into groups of four.  Place one of the Shared Suspense Writing Prompts below for each student into a cup and pass it around the groups.  

1.  Hurrying to get home on time, they decided to run through the cemetery to get home faster.

2.  Finding a treasure map in the old attic, we decided to follow it.

3.  Her computer kept flickering and the next things she saw.....

4.  My friends kept staring at me in fear.  I turned to look in the mirror to see ....

5.  As the boy was swimming in the ocean, he felt something rub up against him.

6.  My dog started barking in the middle of the night.  I crept down stairs.


7.  On the camping trip, the campers realized they were on the wrong trail.

Each person in the group chooses one prompt.  When you signal to begin, each person writes an introduction paragraph for the prompt.  Give them enough time to write then stop the whole class.  Ask them to pass their paper to the left.  That person needs to read what the previous person wrote and start the next paragraph adding suspense.  The 3rd person needs to build more suspense.  The 4th person writes the climax of the story.  Share within the small group.  (Do not write conclusions.  We will use it later.)


I hope you enjoyed learning suspense and climax! Next lesson will be DEVELOPING CHARACTERS

Like always, 
ROCK 'N' WRITE!!!!


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Sunday, March 22, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #17- Writing the Body Section of a Narrative Essay

Writing Mini Lesson #17- Writing the Body Section of a Narrative Essay


Writing the Body Section of a Narrative Essay

After the introduction of a narrative essay, the next step is to write the body of the paper.  It is important to keep the events in sequential order.  Explain that this is the middle of the story where characters are developed and events show a heightened suspense and climax.  It needs to unfold naturally.  This is a great place to bring out the hamburger model to remind them that it is the "meat" of the story!  I like to explain the reason of using three fantabulous events to expound upon as having the Power of 3.  It is the perfect number of events for your story.  Then give details details details of each!  Review the slide of The Power of 3 and the class example with the students.  Or have the class develop the example together.  Last, have your writers take notes on the Body section and Power of 3.



 







If students need more practice or you would like to reinforce this lesson, provide prompts for the students to write 3 events for each.  Here are some samples below.



I hope your students can develop a creative body for your paper!  Stay tuned for the next writing mini lesson #18- Creating Suspense and Climax!

ROCK 'N' WRITE!!!


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Writing Mini Lesson #16- Writing an Introduction for a Narrative Essay

Writing Mini Lesson #16- Writing an Introduction for a Narrative Essay


Now that your students are familiar with how to craft a plot for Narrative writing, let's start writing!  Woo Woo!  I explain to my cherubs that all of the characters do not have to be introduced right away. However, I encourage students to introduce at least the main character in the introduction.  In the body of the paper, students can bring in more characters.  They will also be working on character traits, etc.  Upper elementary students have a habit of wanting to tell a whole story leading up to the story.  I tell them the best way to avoid that is to start off the story with the problem so their story can be developed from there.  Think of CSI.  The crime is presented at the beginning of the show.  Then the story unfolds.  This is the same with narrative writing.  In the introduction, the characters, setting, and basic plot including the problem should be included.  This gives the rest of the essay to expound upon the characters, setting, and plot.  If you don't have the following posters, simply draw a 3 car coaster and talk about the importance of including these 3 items in the introduction.



Then we discuss our class paper that we are writing together.  We decided that the person narrating, would be the class, but since we are writing in a one person point of view, we are saying, "Me."  Telling the reason for using the characters, setting, and plot gives the students a deeper understanding on how the story is being developed.


 I tell the students to glue down the top edge of the roller coaster square to create a flap.  Then, paste the chart under the flap.  I always encourage them to write first!  Then they may color, cut, and paste.




For the setting, use the mentor text, Working Cotton by Sherley Anne Williams.  I choose a student(s) to draw the setting on large paper on the board and we chime into things to add.  Together, we write a vivid description.  Last, they get together with their partners to create their own introductions.  





Once finished with these lessons, pull out the whole group graphic organizer and create the introduction together. (See below for example)  Then students do the same for their own story.  If there is time, it is always good to have them share introductions with another peer or peer group.  This assures that you are on track.


I hope you are confident in writing a superb introduction!  The next lesson #17 will be on the BODY of the paper!  Stay tuned!

Rock 'N' Write

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Saturday, March 21, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #15- Plot

Writing Mini Lesson #15- Plot


Writing Mini Lesson #15- Plot

Now that you learned how to use the graphic organizer in mini lesson #14, let's move onto PLOT and get ready to start planning our own story.  I like to use Cinderella to teach plot.  I read the story to my class and have a student use a toy car to roll up and down the roller coaster poster on my smart board.  If you don't have a smart board or the poster, simply draw a roller coaster on your board to show a visual for plot.  I help the student along by showing that the author does a fabulous job increasing the suspense again and again throughout the story (getting to the ball, dancing, clock strikes midnight, running away, losing her shoe).  Then the climax of the story would be when the prince is placing the shoe on her foot.  The students are so stinkin cute because they get excited along with me when we reach the top of the coaster even though they've heard the story a million times.  We even hold our hands up in the air like we are on the coaster as we read the rest of the story.  Cute, huh?  Anything to get them excited about learning!


Next, I hand out the printable for PLOT for their notebooks.  Once again, you can have your students draw a roller coaster and write in the notes if you don't have the printable.  I have students fill in the missing letter to each step before cutting and pasting them into their notebooks.  Then I ask them to draw arrows and down the coaster to show the direction of movement.  The student sample below forgot the arrows.  Oopsie!

1.  Introduce characters, setting, and problem.
2.  Develop characters and events.
3.  Increase suspense.
4.  Climax!! The point of the highest emotion/tension.
5.  Resolution.




I hope you had fun riding the coaster!  The next mini lesson #16 will be on developing an introduction!   

ROCK 'N' WRITE!!!


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Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Rock and Write

Rock and Write


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Getting Ready
Preparations
Setting Up Notebooks
Student Resources
Million Dollar Dictionary
Mini Lesson Instructions
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Portfolio Labels
Portfolio Message to Parents
Quick Notebook Check Rubric
Tracking Progress Form
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Writing Workshop Rules

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Paragraph Writing Lessons
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Narrative Writing
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H. Body (Power of 3, Suspense, Climax)
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P. Peer Reflection and form
Q. Final Copy
R. Samples of final copy paper
S. Rubric
T. Reflection Form
U. Homework/Classwork Printables

Opinion Writing
(A sample is provided to model and follow through the writing process)
A. Lesson Plans
B. Opinion Elements
C. Opinion Writing CCSS Checklist
D. Prewriting- Brainstorming
E. Prewriting- Graphic Organizer
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Monday, February 23, 2015

Test Prep Tips and Strategies

Test Prep Tips and Strategies


Test Prep Tips and Strategies

I've been fortunate to be a part of two upper elementary groups of amazingly talented teachers.  I've written a post on each site to go along with Test Prep.

You will find several posts on Test Prep with Upper Grade Memoirs.  My post is called Test Prep Ideas- Rockin the Test.




On the Upper Elementary Snapshots post, I wrote the Top Ten Test-Taking Strategies.  There is also a downloadable .pdf!


Still want more ideas?
See my pinterest board!  I've been collecting ideas for Test Prep!






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Thursday, January 1, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #14- Graphic Organizers for Narrative Writing

Writing Mini Lesson #14- Graphic Organizers for Narrative Writing


Previously in Writing Mini Lesson #13, your students set goals for their writing.  Now that the prompt has been introduced and students brainstormed ideas for the prompt, it is time to look at Graphic Organizers that fit well for your expectations.  The one I chose for fourth grade knowing that I want them to create a 5-paragraph essay is directly below.  It sets up the essay perfectly including introduction, topic sentences, details and conclusion.  I find it to be very effective.



Once my students get used to using graphic organizers, I allow them to choose from any of the following or create ones of their own.  They can get very creative!!!  Below you will find graphic organizers that I designed for my students.  You are welcome to use them for your students as well!  Click on the picture and it will take you to my store where I offer them for FREE!  Yes, FREE!


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