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Monday, October 12, 2015

Bunnicula Review and Teaching Ideas

Bunnicula Review and Teaching Ideas


What is not to love this time of year?  Cool weather, colorful leaves, and the excitement of Halloween!  My favorite story for October is Bunnicula by Deborah and James Howe.  I could read it a million times and still find something funny that I may have missed the time before.


Harold, the narrator of the story, is hysterical!  He is just like my dog, Romeo, who begs for food 24-7!  And Chester, the cat, oh my.  My students and I fall off our chairs when read about his shenanigans!  He thinks that the new bunny in the house is a vampire and is determined to get rid of a vampire no matter how crazy he looks!  I've called my own cat Chester by mistake when he acts a little crazy.  He wears garlic around his neck, tries to pound the bunny with a steak..yes steak not stake, and wears a towel around his neck to look like a vampire cape to get everyone's attention.  The poor bunny can't get a break so Harold steps in to help him.  It is a must read!  Teachers, there are so many different reading skills you can pull from this book.  As far as vocabulary, it is packed with new words for upper elementary so I would stop and explain or help students use context clues when we crossed a difficult word.


Here are some great ideas to use with this book!
  • Genre discussion-  Legends and Mysteries
  • Make an advertisement for a lost bunny
  • Point of view of the different characters.
  • Predict what Chester might do next.
  • Inference opportunities are throughout
  • Cause and Effect
  • Compare and Contrast characters
  • Sequence Events
  • Text Connections
  • Summarize an event using transition words
  • Persuade your parents to allow you to get a pet
  • Concrete Poem of a white tomato!
  • 5W's- Who, What, When, Where, Why
  • Homonyms- Steak/Stake
  • Write a Parody of one of the events in the story
  • Character Traits/ Feeling words
  • How did Chester's character change from the beginning of the story to the end?
  • Figurative Language- Simile, Metaphor, Alliteration, Personification, Idiom, Onomatopoeia
  • Lots of Personification!
  • Analyze quotes:  Cruel to be kind.  By hook or by crook.
  • Write a Diamante- change from one character to the next
  • Explain the name of the chapters
  • Research- Rabbit's diet, Transylvania, Animal Fangs, Vampire Bats

Find the book HERE.

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Sunday, October 11, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #31- Crafting a Title

Writing Mini Lesson #31- Crafting a Title


     Were your students successful adding a jammin' conclusion?  Now that the story is complete, it is time to craft an amazing title for the story!  

Crafting a title-  My Rotten Redheaded Brother by Patricia Polacco is a great example!  I also like Sarah, Plain, and Tall by Patricia MacLachlan.  The are both creative titles!  


1.  Review ideas for a crafty title:


  • Always write the paper first!
  • It should tell what the paper is about.
  • It should grab the reader's attention.  (catchy phrase or phrase of a song)
  • It should introduce the tone of the paper.
  • Don't be afraid to use a subtitle!

2.  Create a title for your class story together with your students.

3.  Have students create a title for their own stories.






Next writing mini lesson #32- CUPS to Edit!

Like always, 
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Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #30- Jammin Conclusion

Writing Mini Lesson #30- Jammin Conclusion


      Were your students successful with using a variety of sentences from the last mini lesson?  No more blah blah blah!  Next up is to work on a jammin' conclusion!



Mentor Texts are always a good way to introduce jammin' conclusions.  Some good ones are First Day Jitters by Danneberg, Owl Moonby Yolen, or The First Dog by Jan Brett.   Don't have any of these?  Don't fret!  You can still teach this lesson!


Share some ideas to help student create a Jammin' Conclusion:


    END THE STORY AND TELL THE FUTURE.

    SURPRISE THE READER.

    TELL THE LESSON.

    WRAP UP THE STORY.

    MAKE SURE THE READER WILL FEEL SATISFIED AND     PUT A SMILE ON THEIR FACE!


How can you do that?

Follow one of these TEN WAYS TO END YOUR ESSAY!  I will give you an idea for each that could be related to a story about the Revolutionary War.  


1.  Restate the main idea as a question. Was the Revolutionary War important?


2.  Summarize the main points.  The war was important because it helped America gain independence, democracy grow, and British to lose power.


3.  End the story with a BANG!!!!! Let freedom ring!


4.  Explain the effect....what happens after or in the future.  America can now start developing their own government.


5.  Add something personal.  I thank the Patriots for my freedom of religion.


6.  Give advice.  Always stand up for what you believe in.


7.  Surprise the reader.  The British are back!  (only to sign the Treaty of Paris)


8.  Tell the lesson.  Don't forget that all men are created equal.


9.  Share your feelings or thoughts. It is sad to know how many lives were lost.


10.  Provide a wish or hope.  I wish all people could avoid conflicts!


Take notes of these 10 jammin' conclusions!  Here is a sample:




 Next take a look at a class story you are working on.  If you have one of my interactive notebooks, this is the end of one of the modeling samples.


A bunch of hungry little puppies were squealing for their mother!  The dog in Hillary's hands jumped down and anxiously hobbled towards them!  The adorable little puppies rushed over to her.  Hillary's heart just melted and she could see the compassion form in Pam's eyes.  The treasure was quietly awaiting in the corner with a note that said, "Use this fortune for what you feel is best."  Pam and Hillary looked at each other and knew right away what to do with the money.  It was there right thing to do.
  

Add a jammin' conclusion:
Pam now understood the meaning to Hillary's favorite saying, "Everything happens for a reason."  Looking at the map, they both wondered...who put the message in the bottle?

Now that students have had instruction, ideas, modeling, and samples, they can start working on their own conclusions!  



JAM ON!!!

Next writing mini lesson #31- will be crafting a title!

Like always, 
ROCK 'N' WRITE!!!!

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Monday, August 24, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #29- Variety of Sentences

Writing Mini Lesson #29- Variety of Sentences



     Do your students have million dollar words in their writing from our last mini lesson? Now it is time to move onto a variety of sentences. This is important in student writing to avoid the monotonous tone. "He did.... He has.... He then did...." Blah blah blah. Variety of sentences is also part of DARE to Revise- Exchange.

With a Variety of sentences, I like to give students a specific topic and have them create sentences using each of the following with the topic in mind.  For example:  Bears hibernate.

    1.  With a describing word-  Furry bears are hibernating.

2.  With a question-  Do all bears hibernate?

3.  With a transition word-   After winter, bears wake up from hibernation.

4.  With the word to-  To see a bear hibernating, creep quietly!

5.   With an -ing word-  Hibernating is normal for bears in winter.

6.  With an excitement word-  Yikes!  The bear woke up from hibernation!


Here is an example of how to change writing in story:

Splash! Pam jumped in the freezing lake and grabbed the bottle in the water. Hillary helped her get the paper out of the bottle. What could it be? They revealed a map of a hidden treasure. They didn't hesitate and started to follow it. They knew the location of the island that was on the map. Pam and Hillary got in a paddle boat and paddled like mad across the lake to the island.

With a Variety of Sentences:

Splash! Pam jumped in the freezing lake and grabbed the bottle in the water. Helping her get the paper out of the bottle was her friend, Hillary. What could it be? They revealed a map of a hidden treasure. Without hesitation, they started to follow it. Knowing the location of the island on the map, Pam and Hillary got in a paddle boat and paddled like mad across the lake to the island.


     Wow! Doesn't that make a difference in the story? It flows smoothly and isn't choppy. Smooth like butter! Below is a student example. This student did a great job! The only one that he didn't have a correct example was "describing words". He used food as his first word. He could have used "delicious food" or "steaming food" or "colorful food".



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Tuesday, August 11, 2015

Writing Mini Lesson #28- Million Dollar Words- WORD CHOICE

Writing Mini Lesson #28- Million Dollar Words- WORD CHOICE


Welcome to mini lesson #28!  Whether you have been following all of the mini lessons in order or stumbling across this one individually, you will find some great ideas for lessons on WORD CHOICE!  I call it MILLION DOLLAR WORDS.  In case you missed the last mini lesson, it was on Rockin Beginnings- ways to begin a narrative essay.  Moving onto WORD CHOICE, I have a step-by-step approach to share.

million dollar word color-coding


1.  MENTOR TEXT
For all of my writing lessons, I feel it is important to use MENTOR TEXT to show students how real authors use that skill.  In my mentor text .pdf that is included in all of the STEP-BY-STEP INTERACTIVE WRITING NOTEBOOKS, these are the books I suggest.  If you aren't using the suggested mentor text list in your school, you don't necessarily have to stick by the grade levels below.  If you have one of them in your classroom library already, use it!  I broke it down in grade levels for schools and districts who purchased my writing notebook programs to keep it fresh each year.

(I provided links to some of the books.  I use affiliates solely to keep my blog running so I can provide quality content and ideas for teacher.)

K-  Brave as a Mountain Lion by Ann Herbert Scott
Owl Moon by Jane Yolen

1st-  Quick as a Cricket by Audrey Wood
Same Smug Slug by Pamela Duncan Edwards
Fancy Nancy by Jane O'Conner

2nd-  Officer Buckle and Gloria by Peggy Rathmann
Dinorella:  A Prehistoric Fairy Tale by Pamela Duncan Edwards
Tulip Sees America by Cynthia Rylant

3rd-  The Whales by Cynthia Rylant
The Z Was Zapped by Chris Van Allsburg

4th-  The Boy Who Loved Words by Roni Schotter
Amos and Boris by William Steig
Under the Quilt of Night by Deborah Hopkinson

5th-  When Marian Sang by Pam Munoz Ryan
Noah Webster and His Words by Jeri Chase Ferris
Caves by Stephen Cramer

6th-  If Not for the Cat by Mary Blount Christian
The Man Who Carried His Heart in a Bucket
Roxaboxen by Barbara Cooney

7th-  The Bunyans by Audrey Wood
Monkey Business by Wallace Edwards
The Cat's Pajamas by Wallace Edwards

8th-  Tiki Tiki Tembo by Arlene Mosel
Oh the Place You'll Go by Dr. Seuss

How do you use mentor text?  Go through the book and pick out places where the author shows good imagery.  As you read the book to the students, stop and point out the words you marked.  Here is an example form I Love You the Purplest by Barbara M. Joossee.  Say to the students, "Close your eyes and make a picture in your mind as I read a few sentences."

"The lake slowed its thrashing to a soft, even beat.  The mosquitos dipped low to the water and the water bugs skittered on top.  The moon glowed on one side of the lake while the sun shimmered on the other."

2.  TEACH
Use anchor charts to teach the lessons.  I put them on my smart board and then add them as posters to our writing center.  With the FAAVS, point out that each letter represents a type of million dollar word and they each have a color to represent it.  This is important for practicing because students color-code their sentences.  Also explain that many of the sense words can also be adjectives.  They were added as a separate category to help students think of ways to add million dollar words to their sentences.

make your writing descriptive

Explain each of the FAAVS
SIX TRAITS WORD CHOICE

Then give examples of each one using the same sentence to show how to BUILD A SENTENCE.

WORD CHOICE USING figurative language, adjectives, adverbs, verbs, sense words

3.  TAKE NOTES
Students should take notes to help retain the information and gain ownership of their writing.

4.  STUDENT RESOURCES
Provide students with copies of some of the information to keep in their writing folder to refer to when writing independently.  I also give them a Million Dollar Dictionary with some million dollar words and lines to add more.


5.  CENTER OR GROUP ACTIVITIES
A great way to provide practice during center time is with task cards that scaffold from choosing the best million dollar word to rewriting sentences with million dollar words.  



6.  INDEPENDENT PRACTIVE AND ASSESSMENTS
Last, provide a variety of independent practice.  You can use one as an assessment of the skill. 


color-coding building sentences

         BULLETIN BOARD-  Write a million dollar sentence, color-code, and illustrate.   GREAT IDEA:::Walk around the room while students are adding million dollar words to their narrative stories.  When you find someone who created a great example, give him/her something to write on and place it on a MILLION DOLLAR BULLETIN BOARD.   Students get so excited to see a classmate doing this and start busily doing the same!  It makes an adorable bulletin board.  I actually kept mine up all year and referred back to it and shared examples from it when we were revising a story.  Here are some examples:
color-coding descriptive writing

dollar sign writing

I hope this will help your students with word choice!   
The next writing mini lesson #29- is Variety of Sentences

Like always, 
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Wednesday, July 29, 2015

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